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Robocopp33 - Abilities in Human and Robotic Forms
    Human Form
-Agility - RC has amazing agility in Human Form, allowing him to vault over objects and run on walls. This makes him extremely slippery in combat.
-Hypnosis - RC's glasses can display information to him and allow communication with allies, but the most useful function is hypnosis. The lenses can form an array of hypnotic displays, ranging from swirls to spirals, flashing colors, and other enrapturing patterns to subdue opponents.
    Robotic Form
-Scanner Eyes - In Robotic Form, RC's eyes can scan opponents for identification and weak spots. He can also scan for clues within crime scenes and scan for malware within robotics.
-Strength and Durability - While possessing superhuman strength, RC also has incredible durability. This is because Robocopps are made of Titanead Steel, a man-made metal consisting of steel, lead, and titanium, along with anti-rusting chemicals. While this withdrawals mobility, it greatly increases toughness.
-Internet Accessibil
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Meet the Writer
    Robocopp33
    Male
    Heterosexual
    American/Filipino 
    Real name: [REDACTED]
    Current Age: [REDACTED]
    Funny, smart, creative, caring, kind
    Likes:
-Hypnosis
-Writing
-Drawing
-Being social
-Friends
-Robots
-Steampunk
-Pranks
-Gaming
-Singing
    Fears/Dislikes:
-Being scared
-Pain
-Being alone in the dark
-Failing
-Being criticized
-Mosquitoes
-Curse words
-Violence
-Losing friends
    Good at:
-Math
-Strategizing
-Making friends
-Joking
Favorite game(s): Minecraft, Skylanders: Imaginators, Undertale
Favorite food(s): Mozzarella Sticks, French fries, pizza, hot dogs
Favorite cartoon(s): Mighty Magiswords, Steven Universe
Favorite Movie(s): Kung Fu Panda 1-3, Pacific Rim
Favorite color(s): Purple, yellow
Favorite gamer(s): Jacksepticeye
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[REQUEST] Subnautica Kids - The Story of Mesmo
    Jasmilex had just woken up. Wearing her dark purple gloves, a striped blue skirt, and a purple shirt, she got out of bed and walked to her bathroom to brush her teeth. As she did, she stared at the mirror, her reflection gazing back. She could see her hair in two shades of blue, her purple eyeshadow, and her golden yellow eyes. Her friends would say her stare was almost hypnotic, and she normally accepted such comments as puns, for, as a Mesmer, she could entrance anyone with her gaze alone.
    Unfortunately, her hypnosis often backfired, causing the person in a trance to lose feeling in anything below the neck. She remembered how she tried to get her friend Lupe to make her a sandwich, but she ended up just making her friend's arms numb, so she just made the sandwich herself.
    After she was done, Jasmilex walked to the main room of the Subnautica mansion she and her friends lived in. She passed a window with purple curtains, but then she
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Literature
OC Interview: AaronBrawnstone and Max
Aaron
Glad I can be here. My question is this: Do you like going on adventures?
Max
All the time. I love just the thrill of going on a quest to save the princess. Sometimes, Eris and I go to my world just to find someone who can use our help.
Aaron
Do you feel sorry stomping on a few monsters?
Max
Not really. They always seem to reappear whenever I take them out, like they're teleported away as I stomp on them. I guess I don't feel sorry because they never seem to die from me. Then again, I do feel a little guilt for Goombas, since they never seem to have a chance against me.
Aaron
Is it fun to use a Fire Flower?
Max
Sure it is. I always enjoy the buzz I get from using one, and it's also fun to just blast a Koopa Troopa when he's not looking. It stings a little when your hand explodes with fire, but that's barely even a downside to using it. 
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OC Interview: WolfyTheKitsune and Trance
Wolfy
I'm glad to be here with you, Trance. First question: Who's the one person you always wanted to hypnotize?
Trance
That's easy. I remember this girl from my school; her name is Serena. She acts nice, but she is just cold. She always makes fun of other people, usually for things like owning a weird pet or just being a geek. Just because she's rich, she thinks she can just boss people around. I still don't know what to do with her when she's hypnotized, but I have some ideas.
Wolfy
Do you have a crush on someone? If so, who?
Trance 
*blushes* Joule. She's my crush, and I'm willing to admit it. She's always there for me, whether I'm fighting a ninja or just in need of someone by my side. She always makes me laugh with her jokes too. She also has a crush on me, which makes me feel comfortable saying it.
Wolfy
What's your favorite food? 
Trance
Pizza. I don't think I could find any food I love more than pizza. My dad makes h
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LoL OC Ideas
    Aven, the Clocktower Keeper. Aven is a young boy around eleven years old who owns the Hextech Clocktower of Piltover. His mother was the original keeper, while his father was a stage hypnotist. After the death of his mother, he started tinkering with Hextech gadgets. One day, Jinx, a criminal from Zaun, dashed through the streets of Piltover, wielding powerful explosives.  With a mix of fear and bravery, Aven dashed in with a Hextech weapon, taking out Jinx before anyone was hurt. He now fights alongside Jayce, Vi, and Caitlyn, the authorities of his hometown. He has also made fast friends with Ezreal, a young explorer.
    Aven's weapon is a gear with spiked cogs. Connected to his arm, it spins around, cutting opponents. His passive causes it to have a Wind-up resource meter that slowly depletes. As it depletes, Aven's basic attack damage goes down. At max Wind-up, his Damage is heavily buffed. As it goes to half Wind-up, his basic attack damage is normal
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Literature
Jhin, the Virtuoso - League of Legends
    Well, I'm here to talk about one of my favorite League of Legends characters: Jhin, the Virtuoso.
    Jhin is a psychopath behind a smiling mask, killing in the name of art. He not only believes that death is beautiful, but believes it is the most spectacular moment in a man's life, always trying to make each one "perfect". With his gun as his paintbrush, he murders countless people, horrifying onlookers of his sinister theater.
    In the game, Jhin is an immobile marksman with the most long-ranged abilities in the game.
Passive: Whisper
    Jhin's gun, Whisper, has four shots. The last shot is always a critical hit and does bonus damage based on the target's missing health. After firing his fourth shot, or if he stops firing for a moment, Jhin reloads his gun.
    Also, Whisper has an unchangeable attack speed, and all attack speed or crit chance bonuses he gets per game is converted into Attack Damage. His critical hits do l
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The Gamers - To Build a Mech: Intro
    "You up for video games?" D.va asked. She was talking to Tetra Oxton, the eleven-year-old son of her friend, Tracer. He had her messy brown hair along with yellow eyes that came from somewhere else in the family. He wore a brown aviator jacket, orange shorts, white shoes, and a Chronal Accelerator. Invented by Winston, it keeps him locked in the present while giving him control of his timeline.
    It took him a while to respond. "Huh? Oh, no thanks, love." They were in the "Blank Zone" as it was called. It was a world between worlds, where people from different universes could interact with one another. It wasn't really that bad; it looked like a normal city. 
    D.va smiled. "Scared of getting beat again?"
    "Not at all." 
    "Beat by what?" Tetra nearly jumped. He and D.va were the only people that were there, even if they were waiting for someone. He looked up and saw who had spoken up; it was a girl around his age
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The Spectrals - The Forest Dryad
    Aaron Storm was a Spectral, a hunter of creatures of the Underworld known as Underbeasts. He was eleven years old, training for most of his life. He had indigo blue hair and tanned skin, along with golden yellow eyes. Wearing jeans and an orange shirt with leather boots, he wielded a crossbow, the first weapon he had ever gotten.
    Aaron spotted Jenny Rider up ahead. She was also a Spectral, same age as him. She wore glasses, with blue eyes and black hair with pink streaks. She was wearing orange shorts and a black shirt. She wielded a golden dagger that can blind opponents. While she was only good with it, she wielded it with amazing skill.
    The two were on a quest. A Havenspirit - a creature of the Heavens - had requested for a duo of Spectrals to deliver something to the forest he lived in. Aaron had peeked at the gift, which was a massive acorn. Jenny was more interested in getting the acorn to who asked for it rather than wondering what
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The Gamers - Characters
     All characters are eleven years old.
Max: Son of Mario. Like his father, he can jump high up and stomp down on opponents. He also wields the power of the Fire Flower, allowing him to shoot fireballs.
Short brown hair and blue eyes.
Eris Kaldwin: Daughter of Emily Kaldwin from Dishonored 2. She was trained by her mother and grandfather, Corvo Attano, in sword fighting and stealth. On her eleventh birthday, she accepted the Mark of the Outsider, giving her amazing powers.
Short black hair and brown eyes.
Tetra Oxton: Son of Lena Oxton, alias Tracer, from Overwatch. Inheriting his mother's disorder (he warped in and out of time, much like his parent used to), Winston, the brilliant scientist, built a copy of Lena's Chronal Accelerator. It does not only keep Tetra in the present, but also helps him speed up, slow down, or even reverse his own timeline (he still ages normally). His Accelerator also came with powerful dual energy pistols. 
Bonus: He get
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[Request] The Spectrals - Leviathan of Kutback
    Aaron and Jenny were looking for trouble... again. They were Spectrals - hunters of Underbeasts. Now, Underbeasts are not wildebeests wearing underpants. They are creatures of the Underworld, such as griffons, zombies, and those dang bloodflies from Dishonored 2 (I have a fear of those things). Spectrals had the fun yet perilous job of hunting down these creatures and sending them back to the Nether. 
    Aaron Storm, who was eleven years old, was one of the first. He had tanned skin and golden yellow eyes, along with navy blue hair. He wore jeans, an orange t-shirt, and brown leather boots. On his belt, he had a holster for his crossbow, the first weapon he ever got and the first one he used to kill an Underbeast with. 
    Jenny Rider was also eleven years old, with blue eyes and short, black hair with pink streaks. She wore a black shirt, Nike shoes, and orange shorts, and she even wore glasses. Her weapon was a golden dagger t
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Vainglory: Trance and Joule - A Cold Night
    Trance was cold. Actually, he was freezing. It was the middle of winter, and while more experienced heroes got to continue fighting in the Halcyon Fold, he was stuck shivering his butt off in a small log cabin that never got a fireplace.
    I'm glad there are lights, but sometimes, it stinks being the new recruit, he thought.
    Travis "Trance" Acadan was a preteen of eleven, with flaming red hair and pale skin. His eyes were yellow circles with purple swirls that matched his weapon,  a golden yellow yo-yo with dark purple spirals on a red string. Instead of his usual neon green shorts, dark brown headphones, and indigo shorts, he wore a bulky black hoodie and yellow pants.
    After minutes of ice-cold torture, Trance heard footsteps and a few knocks. Summoning his courage, he got up and walked to the door, glad his mesmerizing eyes could glow in the dark. He opened the door and saw Joule, the young mech pilot. He imm
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Vainglory OC - Trance
    This is my Vainglory OC: Trance, a young hypnotist that excels at manipulating opponents.
    Appearance
    Trance is a bold preteen around the age of eleven. Dashing into danger with a smirk, he is awkwardly short but surprisingly agile, with flaming red hair, pale, ghost-white skin, and a grin that always makes him look like he recently pulled someone's pants down. He wears a neon green t-shirt, indigo blue shorts, and a dark brown pair of headphones covering his ears.
    Despite all this, he is most known for his hypnotic eyes, which are golden yellow circles with purple spirals. His weapon is a small yo-yo, which mirrors his eyes - golden yellow with purple swirls on each side. You can usually find him playing with his toy, flicking it forward and watching it come back. 
Powers
Heroic Perk: Hypnotic Spiral
    When Trance hits an enemy hero, they are slowed for a period of time. Additionally, landing
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Double-Edged Blade
This blade doesn't necessarily have to be a sword, it can be any sort of weapon. Yet it still obtains "Double Edged" for a good reason. Seeing as such weapons as projections rather then physical objects, they cannot be lost or stolen, and all have the same programming, though can fit to any sort of style that is used by a person and use any sort of talent they possess to do so. Of course, the name is more or less symbolic then literal, as it were.
The first edge that is meant as an offense against attacking enemies is the first edge, which allows for the use of martial arts/magic spells that are based on virtue attacks.
However, the second edge is very vital. As it allows not only for the use of healing the body and mind if in peril, but also will deliver a bit of a backblow against cruel and wicked deeds should someone use or attempt to use said weapon to do harm. As such, it will not work properly for this. And will hurt painfully, though in doing so it extracts Sin from people's spi
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Magic Island Thomas' Story-Chapter 4
Half a year has past, and it's time for the annual Magical Island Dance. Thomas and Rosie have been an amazing team. Every time Thomas got hurt, Rosie would always heal him with her powers, every time Rosie would use her force field to protect herself, Thomas would ambush any attacker who tries to harm Rosie, and they both cherished their friendship. After winning at the Fire Mountain, Thomas is gonna ask her out to the dance. Thomas knocked on her door, "Who is it?" said Rosie. Thomas replied "It's me." Rosie then let him in. Thomas had a gift for her but he's hiding it behind his back. Rosie said "Can you please help me find my cellphone?" Thomas put the gift in his pocket and helped her search for her phone. Thomas then found it in Rosie's boot. "Found it Rosie!" Rosie felt great joy. "Thank you so much! My fiancé must be calling me." Thomas paused "Fiancé?" Rosie smiled "Yes, he's gonna pick me up. Again thank you for finding my phone. I'm lucky to have you as m
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    I'm doing a new thing now: The LoL Character Creator! Inspired by Nevercake's series "Community Crafted Champions," this is a series where you guys help me make a League of Legends champion! 
    Here's how it works. In the series, people leave comments used to create a champion. It would be their appearance, abilities, and/or name. I then use chosen comments to draw a character, and that's that!

    Rules are simple. You can only describe one feature. Comments that feature an entire character would be ignored or only partially followed. 
    Example
    Do not say: He is a young boy with black hair and blue eyes, and he has ice powers.
    You can say: They would have ice powers.
    You can say: He/she has hair short yet full of things (rocks, sticks, etc.).

Final note. The champion that shall be made here is slightly made. He/she (gender still up for debate) will be an Ionian champion with a flute. That's it. Everything else will be decided by you guys. Have fun!
    When I discover BOI for the first time.



    So Ceris is sitting on a couch, reading a book. Suddenly, RC bursts into the room, arms flapping around like crazy, eyes wide.  

RC
BOI BOI BOI BOI BOI
BOI BOI BOI BOI BOI
BOI BOI BOI BOI BOI
BOI BOI BOI BOI BOI
BOI BOI BOI BOI BOI
BOI BOI BOI BOI BOI
BOI BOI BOI BOI BOI
BOI BOI BOI BOI BOI
BOI BOI BOI BOI BOI!

    Ceris' eyes widen as his arms fly up, his book shooting into the air. 

Ceris
Calm down, RC! What's wrong? 

RC
BOI BOI BOI BOI BOI
BOI BOI BOI BOI BOI
BOI BOI BOI BOI BOI
BOI BOI BOI BOI BOI
BOI BOI BOI BOI BOI
BOI BOI BOI BOI BOI!

    Wolfy then rushes into the room.

Wolfy
What's going on!?

Ceris
I think he just discovered BOI!

RC
BOI BOI BOI!



Ceris: cerisbeech.deviantart.com/
Wolfy: wolfythekitsune.deviantart.com…

(Wolfy, please do not add this to your "For Me" collection.)

    Human Form

-Agility - RC has amazing agility in Human Form, allowing him to vault over objects and run on walls. This makes him extremely slippery in combat.

-Hypnosis - RC's glasses can display information to him and allow communication with allies, but the most useful function is hypnosis. The lenses can form an array of hypnotic displays, ranging from swirls to spirals, flashing colors, and other enrapturing patterns to subdue opponents.


    Robotic Form
-Scanner Eyes - In Robotic Form, RC's eyes can scan opponents for identification and weak spots. He can also scan for clues within crime scenes and scan for malware within robotics.

-Strength and Durability - While possessing superhuman strength, RC also has incredible durability. This is because Robocopps are made of Titanead Steel, a man-made metal consisting of steel, lead, and titanium, along with anti-rusting chemicals. While this withdrawals mobility, it greatly increases toughness.

-Internet Accessibility - Robocopps cannot only access the Digital World, but also use their AI to connect to the Internet and hack technology.

- Electricity - RC can launch lightning from his hands during combat. He can also compress electricity and blast it as a ball of plasma.


    Transformation

    When RC transforms into Robotic Form, Titanead Steel emerges from his back and spreads across his skin, forming the Robocopp exoskeleton. While it may seem that the human RC is inside, cutting away the Titanead Steel reveals a robotic endoskeleton. Turning into Human Form causes the Titanead Steel to melt away and dissolve, although the temperature does not rise upon melting. Note that RC cannot morph back to a human if any part of the endoskeleton is visible.
    Further more, different parts of RC's body can be in different modes. For example, RC can morph his eyes into Robotic Form to scan for items while leaving the rest of his body in Human Form to gain the agility boost. Another way to use this is to have the hands in Robotic Form to use electricity while the face is in Human Form to use his glasses.
    Robocopp33
    Male
    Heterosexual
    American/Filipino 
    Real name: [REDACTED]
    Current Age: [REDACTED]

    Funny, smart, creative, caring, kind

    Likes:
-Hypnosis
-Writing
-Drawing
-Being social
-Friends
-Robots
-Steampunk
-Pranks
-Gaming
-Singing

    Fears/Dislikes:
-Being scared
-Pain
-Being alone in the dark
-Failing
-Being criticized
-Mosquitoes
-Curse words
-Violence
-Losing friends

    Good at:
-Math
-Strategizing
-Making friends
-Joking

Favorite game(s): Minecraft, Skylanders: Imaginators, Undertale
Favorite food(s): Mozzarella Sticks, French fries, pizza, hot dogs
Favorite cartoon(s): Mighty Magiswords, Steven Universe
Favorite Movie(s): Kung Fu Panda 1-3, Pacific Rim
Favorite color(s): Purple, yellow
Favorite gamer(s): Jacksepticeye
Meet the Writer
I did this after seeing Wolfy's "Meet The Artist."
wolfythekitsune.deviantart.com…
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    I'm doing a new thing now: The LoL Character Creator! Inspired by Nevercake's series "Community Crafted Champions," this is a series where you guys help me make a League of Legends champion! 
    Here's how it works. In the series, people leave comments used to create a champion. It would be their appearance, abilities, and/or name. I then use chosen comments to draw a character, and that's that!

    Rules are simple. You can only describe one feature. Comments that feature an entire character would be ignored or only partially followed. 
    Example
    Do not say: He is a young boy with black hair and blue eyes, and he has ice powers.
    You can say: They would have ice powers.
    You can say: He/she has hair short yet full of things (rocks, sticks, etc.).

Final note. The champion that shall be made here is slightly made. He/she (gender still up for debate) will be an Ionian champion with a flute. That's it. Everything else will be decided by you guys. Have fun!

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Greetings, fellow viewers of the internet! My name is Robocopp33! I'm a soon-to-be gamer and current writer.
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AaronBrawnstone Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2017
Thank you for the watch and llama! ^_^
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Robocopp33 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2017  Student Writer
You gave it first. I just had to let karma do the rest. Now, if you excuse me, I'll go back to staring at Wolfy's amazing drawings.

P.S. Check out CerisBeech and RainbowiestHowls.
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mellowghost Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for adding my poem to your :+fav:!!
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CerisBeech Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the watch. :3
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Robocopp33 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2017  Student Writer
*starts singing 'You're Welcome' from the movie Moana*
Seriously though, you're welcome.
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CerisBeech Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Huh...

I guess I shall try Moana out.
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Robocopp33 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2017  Student Writer
You should. It was a great movie.
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xOlive Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Welcome to deviantart~
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Robocopp33 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2016  Student Writer
Thanks ( sorry I didn't notice this. )
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